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Wordspill: Sea Of Thought by ~myreikko:iconmyreikko:



Let a flood of water rise and fall
Let it sink up whatever to please.
Shores and more they come between
Across the floors they meet.
Shall we see how fast the motion roars,
See how greatly tamed.
The creator as it said.
The creator retained.

He, she, we once were made
Not gained by thee.

Sea  of light,
Sea of air,
Sea of  Clouds and stares.
Sea of   People,
Sea of  Shells ,
Sea of  Sand Everywhere.

Sea of treetops,
Sea of hills,
Sea of mountains,
Sea come clear.
Sea of heaven lifted far from blind.
Sea of stars not too far from sight.

Sea of creation of the standing.
Sea of destruction of the fallen.
Sea of anger,
Sea of wealth,
Sea of faith and unbearable guilt.

Sea of dreams and others emotes.
See to a sudden reality came closed.

Life a Bliss so far from hope
See the land filled with such
What only water knows.
©2009 ~myreikko
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Author's Comments

Created with =Wordspill's contest in mind. =]

"By the way you guys, very awsome way of thinking.
I love how this is such a great excercise for writters
to explore and master their craft."

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'Sea Of Thought'
Well after reading what I got down after inverting the
text colors, pretty much my mind was placed on morphing the word.
Sea is vast large/enormous body of water with no life except it's depths. Our world is a creation of life due to water and the energy from the sun.
Pretty much we should give props for it by being part of the creation of life.

Anything can be a SEA. Enormous numbers makes this up.
Quantities in large numbers in one flow makes a SEA.

So think deeply when you read my poem =].

I tend to write in open since I don't really follow
the rules of literature.

Hope you like it ^-^.

=To everyone else!!
Please check out =WordSpill !
Such a great idea, Such a great way to help the community of creatives. Cheers!

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:icontwilights-maiden:
I love the depths you pulled from for this one, great concept!

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"One must still have chaos in oneself to be able to give birth to a dancing star." ~ Nietzsche
:iconmyreikko:
Thank you =D

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.08:MyReIkKo:08.

"Let the Humans play as they please."

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